The chart below shows number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart illustrates the information about the number of mature people attending

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6 sports, including tennis, basketball,

cricket

, golf, swimming, football and rugby in the

years

1997 and 2017.

Overall

, all the

sport

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categories

which

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adults

participating rise

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participated rose

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from 1997 to 2017, except

cricket

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dropped, and swimming remained stable. Tennis was the most selected by adults,

whist

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basketball and

cricket

were

least

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. In 2019, 50,000 adults

joining

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in tennis before increasing to around 55,000. In terms of golf,

this

had the smallest change between 2

years

which grew

approximately

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2,000 from around 30,000 people in 1997,

while

football and rugby seem the largest increase from just above 30,000 to slightly below 50,000.

In addition

, basketball players in 2017

was

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around 20,000 which was 2 times greater than in 1997.

However

cricket

had

the

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decrease trend that significantly dropped from 25,000 to 8,000 within 20

years

On the other hand

, 35,000 mature people preferred

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swimming which remained unaltered in these 2

years

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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2Word repetition
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12Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

165 words

6.50

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