Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of crime committing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that several convicts who have been in prison for a
while
are good citizens now and, they are a good choice to talk to pupils about offences. I personally partially agree with this
statement and I guess this
activity might be beneficial or dangerous. In this
essay, I will argue my opinion.
In my point of view, it is a good idea that children
are informed about crimes and their consequences on their lives and communication, and who is better than a person
who has committed infringements before and now is a reliable character to advise? Students can be aware that if they step into these dangerous groups, they will lose numerous precious individuals in their lives. For example
, they aren't
endorsed on their family and friend's behalf emotionally and monetary. In addition
, they constantly encounter hazard issues and threats, so that, they can't
sleep in peace of mind. Finally
, they can explain how offences stray children
from their aims and if they immerse themselves in crimes, they won't
be able to find a way to rescue themselves and their whole lives will be ruined.
On the other hand
, I believe that we should consider the potential effects and subsequent of these methods, however
, schools should be cautious about a person
that they want to invite to talk. Because some of them are still a band and it is their trick to go to schools and seduce children
. For instance
, they can give some information about the student's address and parents and burglar their possessions. Therefore
, it is difficult to find an accurate person
.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, debate about criminals at schools is beneficial but teachers need to ensure that who they intend to invite and give a speech, a person
doesn't
lead to serious problems for children
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