You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven't finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain why you haven't handed in the project yet - request more time to do it.
Dear Mr. Anderson,
My name is Mark, and I am one of your first-year students in the modern history class. I am writing to explain some reasons for the delay
of
my project results and ask for extra time to finish my study.
You asked us to find a meaningful event in the history of our town, and I opted for Change preposition
in
Big
Boston Fire in 1964. I started with the Internet resources but later realized, that it could be possible to find some real witnesses of that event. I have managed to Correct article usage
the Big
found
one, and we are having Wrong verb form
find
meeting
on Friday next week.
I want to make my study as well-rounded as possible and ask you to Add an article
a meeting
extand
the deadline of the project Correct your spelling
extend
for
2 weeks. I will use Change preposition
by
this
time to handle an interview and prepare a wonderful presentation. I promise,
you will be satisfied.
I am looking forward to your decision.
Yours sincerely,
Mark PotterRemove the comma
apply
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task response
Provide more specific reasons for the delay of the project and how it relates to the request for an extension.
coherence cohesion
Use a clearer structure for the explanation of reasons and the request for an extension to improve coherence and cohesion.
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary used to express the reasons and the request for an extension.
grammatical range
Use a wider variety of complex sentence structures to demonstrate grammatical range.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite