Children nowadays are experiencing health issues, which were previously believed to be exclusive to adults. Obesity, a significant health problem, is widespread among young individuals. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At present,

obesity

is one of the major health

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to adolescents,

moreover

, in the past decades people thought that

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that disease

it's

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only for adulthood.

However

, personally, I believe that children become obese

due to

eating sugary and fast foods and

government

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should impose clear restrictions

of

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not allowing humans to eat

such

food. First of all,

young

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the young

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generation is the

most

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age group who is in danger

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obesity

, because some of them,

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don't have time to prepare food at their homesteads because of studies.

Hence

, they prefer to buy fast foods during break and lunch time and even super which can cause sickness in their lives.An example to illustrate, that would be my fellow colleagues, they order

McDonalds

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Mcdonald's

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at least twice

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a day and two of them have big

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which shows that they are obese.To avoid

this

,the state must increase taxes and

price

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prices

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in restaurants

such

as Burger

Kings

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and KFC to reduce

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of

obesity

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unfortunately

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their prices are cheaper than that for traditional meals To add on,recently children are

also

growing up eating sweet snacks,

for

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chocolates,sweets and drinking cola which can give rise to diabetic illness.

Furthermore

,

for instance

, our neighbour's daughter,

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is sixteen old,

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she is crying her mother will give her

lolpop

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lollipop

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to stop her weeping,

therefore

, the life of young society is at risk of sugary diseases.Parents should educate their toddlers without fear, for them to take healthy and traditional eatables and be aware of side effects in the long run.

To conclude

, I believe that young individuals , nowadays are experiencing

obesity

problems which were for adults in the past,

therefore

,

this

is

due to

lack

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of knowledge and they

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ought to

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eating habits.