The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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not good for the new generation's development in modern life.
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I agree with the fact that the traditional way of keeping up with life is ancient and ancestral expertise, I totally believe that they
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have to adapt these techniques to the new world, so I believe that the old contemporaries
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a role in our growth in modern life. In every moment of history, the human species has needed ancient knowledge as a base to get
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they have invented lots of things. Even though they do not only keep ancestral ways of living or thinking, they naturally adapt to new environments to survive better.
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natural instincts; the new peers learns from the old
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to keep up the society's know-how level and develop it.
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, my parents taught me how to act in public, the behaviours. And without them teaching me
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, everyone would look at me weirdly in the streets.
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, we do not have to base our lives on the idea of seeing the planet. Because not everything they did in their time is nowadays acceptable. The context has changed , and the vision of some newborns transformed the
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humans work.
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, my friends' grandparents think that technology does not increase productivity, but with new AI tools, we can do stuff much faster than we could before.
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, ancestral education is important for us to get our base. But we have to build and adapt new creations and discoveries to it , so we are not marginalised from society.
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, we are integrated into groups and not starting up from zero
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why I am not in agreement with
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The student takes a clear view against the idea in the prompt.
coherence
There are examples from family life to support the point.
structure
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional ideas
  • Modern life
  • Younger generations
  • Stability
  • Guidance
  • Foundation
  • Cultural heritage
  • Rigid gender roles
  • Resistance to new technologies
  • Adaptability
  • Innovative solutions
  • Respecting elders
  • Maintaining family bonds
  • Stifle progress
  • Fusion of ideas
  • Outdated values
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