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Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#year #language #people #life #world
Several factors including upcoming technological advancement and
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 emergence of social
medias
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media
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 have resulted in more socialization via the medium.
Moreover
, improved transportation aggravated
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interactions within the different societies.
This
 way the original
language
 of those seems to be decreasing every year. With
such
condition
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, some believe that it is okay to be with minimal communication medium.
While
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others think there are risks involved with
such
 situations. I too consider
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 in our native
language
 is essential and
need
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 to
preserve
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. There are certain people who believe that the fewer spoken
language
 on
this
 planet the happier and easier our life will be. It brings
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commonness among
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individuals without having to struggle
learning
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to learn
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 foreign languages.
For instance
, we see more
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translators and tour
guide
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guides
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 with certain
language
 experts
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who
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they
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can speak multiple languages. The existence of all these people is
due to
lack
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a lack
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 of commonness within
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humanity, where when we travel to other places we
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have to hire a tour guide with
translator
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the translator
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.
Nevertheless
, we see many
countries
 in the world where they feel
pinch
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the pinch
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 of losing their precious
language
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personally feel that the existence of different
language
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languages
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 in
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society is
jewel
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the jewel
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 of the country for its security and
economical
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 purpose as well. We see
countries
 in the world with lots of cultural conflicts going
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to
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 the extent of colonizing smaller
countries
 all because certain aspects of the culture
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 being vanished, where the
language
 is the main component of the culture.
To conclude
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preservation
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the preservation
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 of minor languages around the world is seen
quite
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as quite
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 important for
its
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their
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 security and for the generation of personal income and
countries
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country
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 revenue as a whole.
Therefore
language
 needs to be preserved from extinction.
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