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You have recently moved to a different house.Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letterexplain why you have moveddescribe the new houseinvite your friend to come and visit

#house #friend #letterexplain #moveddescribe #houseinvite #visit
Dear Marsh, I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I am writing
this
 to inform you about changing my living place. You know that I have been living in Toronto since 2022 with my family members, and I am quite happy with my living place.
Also
, you are aware that I have one child, and next month he will turn five. We have planned to admit him to a good school near
Manitoba
. For my son's schooling purposes, we will have to move to
Manitoba
. We have already booked an apartment in
Manitoba
, and it is well-appointed and convenient. The most important thing is that the bus and metro station are very near our new apartment. My son can easily commute through
this
 transportation mode from home to school. You are cordially invited,
along with
 your family members, to our new apartment in
Manitoba
. I hope you will enjoy the new place, and we will have a great time. See you soon, and take care of yourself. Thanks, Faisal
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task response
Ensure that the main points of the task are fully addressed, including an adequate explanation of the reason for the move and a clear invitation for the friend to visit.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical transition between ideas and paragraphs to enhance the overall coherence of the letter.
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and vividly. Avoid overreliance on familiar words and phrases.
grammatical range
Work on the accuracy and complexity of sentence structures, including the use of varied tenses and sentence types.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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