The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use
The pie charts illustrate the average housekeeping energy consumption and proportions of the earth heating gases of household
appliances
in Australia.
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, utilize the largest amount of power. Use synonyms
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heating systems and other Use synonyms
appliances
produce a larger amount of air pollution in Australian houses.
The three most outstanding energy users are heaters, Use synonyms
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heaters, and other facilities which Use synonyms
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are the main greenhouse gas producers as well.The biggest proportion of energy-acquiring devices belongs to heaters, sharing 42% of Linking Words
overall
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heating equipment, which ranks Use synonyms
second,
is responsible for 40%, Linking Words
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the other Linking Words
appliances
comprise 15% of the figure. The gas emission chart particularly presents that 32%, 28%, and 15% of total heating gas release routes to Use synonyms
water
heating, heating, and other purposes.
The three minor power consumers are the chilling units, the lights, and the refrigerators which account for 2%, 4%, and 7%. Meanwhile, they are the least air-polluting households with 12%, 7%, and 5% percentages.Use synonyms
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