The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.

The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007.
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The pie charts below depict the percentage of how UK citizens preferred their personal accommodations by four different categories in two years 1991 and 2007.
According to
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the data, we can see that owning a house in Britain accounted for the largest proportion
while
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the other three sectors namely social renting, privately rented houses and social homes took up a smaller share in both years.
It is clear that
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60% of British people possessed a home of their own in 1991
then
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the rate rose slightly to 70% in 2007, which was the largest figure on the list.
Next,
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the rate for social houses for rent declined marginally by only 6% but it still ranked second after
home owners
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.
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, private renting remained stable at 11% during the period
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the
last
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factor - social housing saw a minimal decrease from 6% to 2% in 2007 and it was
also
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the smallest percentage compared with other segments.
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