A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there
Dear Ali,
I am delighted to hear that from you . You are planning to come to our city
for
work as an accountant . In Change preposition
to
this
city you can find lots of jobs and opportunities also
accounting
Correct article usage
the accounting
filed
is Correct your spelling
field
requirement
in Add an article
a requirement
this
area . Eavery
season the city Correct your spelling
Every
make
a festival you can attend it opens Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
4:00
PM to 12 AM .
With regard to Change preposition
from 4,00
an
accommodation I would love to suggest that we Correct article usage
apply
can
share my apartment and divide the cost equally Verb problem
apply
is
is not expensive Correct your spelling
it
that is
so benefit
to us Replace the word
beneficial
in addition
, it is near from
your work you can walk you do not need a car to get there .
Regarding Change preposition
to
a
transportation the Remove the article
apply
cost
30$ as per month you can go anywhere with a card you must charge the card from next to Correct subject-verb agreement
costs
the
our apartment .
Every Remove the article
apply
weekends
I meet my friends and Change to a singular noun
weekend
others
people in a cafe if you want to make Correct quantifier usage
other
friendship
.
I am happy to Replace the word
friends
hearing
from you soon .Wrong verb form
hear
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task response
Address all the points in the prompt including suggesting an interesting part of the city to live in, describing the public transport, and suggesting how to meet new people. Also, provide more details and specific examples for each point.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the logical structure of the letter to make it more coherent and cohesive. Use clear paragraphing, and organize ideas to have a logical flow of information.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary, including more specific and appropriate words for the given context. Also, pay attention to word choice and accurate use of expressions.
grammatical range
Pay attention to the sentence structure and grammar usage. Use a variety of sentence structures and tenses, and make sure to have accurate and appropriate use of grammar throughout the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,