Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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are more creative and symbolic than others. There would not be any restrictions to

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government

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their

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they need

freedom

for their creations. I do not agree with

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statement

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several reasons. In

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I will explain

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my point of view. Mainly, all

artists

are human beings, they have different thinking patterns and

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various

ideas

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could not

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allow them to express their

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without filtering. Most

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the

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young people

following

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different

famous

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characters

and they try to

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imitate

them.

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point, if they provide wrong information to their fans they will blindly believe that.

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one of the famous

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said, it is not

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for sexual

violance

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live so, all of his followers watching

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programme

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, he said the wrong idea.

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, we do not want to give them

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total

freedom

to express their

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ideas

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regulations

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same

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. Some have

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audience

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instanse

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instance

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film

has

produced

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in Sri Lanka,

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corporation not allow to release

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because

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some parts of

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this

film

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tally with their

regulations

but somehow,

this

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drawback

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we can see when there are some

regulations

for

artists

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but sometimes they try to

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reason I agree with the above

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. If we give them

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control sometimes there may be

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influence

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thier follwers

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their followers

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