Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish. There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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are more creative and symbolic than others. There would not be any restrictions to

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they need

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for their creations. I do not agree with

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are human beings, they have different thinking patterns and

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allow them to express their

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young people

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point, if they provide wrong information to their fans they will blindly believe that.

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will be harmful in the future.

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one of the famous

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to express their

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to control them.

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, because of some rules and

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they can not give their creations to

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we can see when there are some

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but sometimes they try to

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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