The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.

The picture illustrates the manufacturing of chocolate from cacao trees.

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this

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is a complicated man-made linear process involving 2 main stages: raw materials processing and physical

transforming

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the beginning, cacao trees grown in South America or Indonesia are ripe red pods harvested by the

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farmer

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the outer skin is removed to collect the cacao’s

beans

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. These

beans

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are wrapped

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leaves to prepare for fermentation. After that, the cacao

beans

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are spread into layers on a plate under the sunlight to dry. Before that, the dried

beans

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are packaged in large sacks and transported to chocolate factories by train or lorry. Simultaneously, the

beans

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are roasted in a specialized machine at 350 celsius degrees. In the next step, roasted

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crushed to turn into powder

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the outer shell is removed.

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, the inner part puts pressure on the bean powder to liquefy. The final products are liquid chocolate which are ready to turn into commercial goods.