The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in BritIain in 1991 and 2000
The pie chart in the picture describes the aims of
people
coming to the public library
in Britain in the year
1991 and 2000. There are several similarities between both years, with one difference in the Fix the agreement mistake
years
year
2000, which
borrowing and returning videos Change preposition
in which
was
added. In the Change the verb form
were
year
1991, most people
went to the public library
for borrowing and returning purposes, rather than studying or obtaining information. On
2000, there Change preposition
In
is
a decline Wrong verb form
was
of
Change preposition
in
people
going to the library
to borrow or give back books that the library
has lend
. Change the verb form
lent
However
, there is a rise in people
wanting to get information from the library
and borrowing videos. On the other hand
, there is
a very low number Wrong verb form
was
in
Change preposition
of
people
going to the library
for studying
in Change preposition
to study
year
2000.Change the article
the year
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