The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.
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The diagram illustrates the process of producing nuclear energy with the use of a chemical element, uranium.
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, there are six stages in the nuclear power cycle. The first three phases are the production of electricity,
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the
last
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three stages involve the disposal and re-use of the materials. It is clearly seen that the initial step in creating
electricity
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source is
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the mining
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of the element. The first
stage
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shows that uranium is harvested deep in the earth's surface with the use of drilling machines. The raw element is
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transformed and enhanced to create a product called U-235 fuel pellets. In
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three, these pellets are utilized by generators to generate
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power supply. The storage and use of the U-235 fuel may
last
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for about four years, once consumed, it either proceeds to
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five or six, wherein a certain amount of gas can be recycled in the fifth phase,
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in the
last
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stage
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, some quantity which cannot be reprocessed is placed in containers prior to disposal through the process of burying.

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