The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions from 1980 to 2010

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions from 1980 to 2010
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The diagram above illustrates the proportion of travellers to Scotland who came across 4 different attractions from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
,
while
there was an upward trend in the number of tourists visiting the zoo, and castle the opposite was seen in aquariums and festivals. Accounting for 23%, the percentage of tourists visiting the castle was 7% less than the highest, festivals, and twice as much as the safari.
This
figure experienced a substantial increase and
then
peaked at 44% in 1995. Despite the drop to 32% since 1995, the castle was still the most visited place. The national parks exhibited fluctuations over two decades before increasing to 20%
at the end
of the observed period/ the conclusion of the study period.
Conversely
, the number of festivals was the highest, with 30%, 10% higher than aquatic museums. A gradual descent was seen in the number of visitors who visited the feast.
Similarly
, aquariums experienced a significant decline after peaking at 36% in 1990 and became the place which attracted the least tourists.
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