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The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of passenger cars being produced all around the globe in the year
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2015.
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, Greater China's companies ranked first in manufacturing passenger cars in the world,
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 the figure for the Middle East and Africa was the lowest.
According to
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 the data, the proportion of cars being manufactured in Greater China was the highest, 26 %. Europe stands second with a slight difference from China, of about 25 %.
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, the percentage of manufactured passenger
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 in North America experienced a percentage of 19 per cent and 16 % of the total portion was accounted for Japan and Korea. The remaining 14 % proportions were related to 4 areas, South Asia with 8 % and 4 % allocated to South America. Middle East and Africa experienced the least distribution, 2 %.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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