the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetable per day in uk from 2001 to 2008

the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits  and vegetable per day in uk from 2001 to 2008
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The table illustrates the
consumption
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of fruit and
vegetables
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in five portions by
women
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,
men
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, and
children
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in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
Overall
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, the peak
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consumption
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of fruit and
vegetables
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for both
women
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and
men
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was in 2006,
while
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for
children
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, it was in 2007. The figure
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men
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's and
children
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's
consumption
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was steady between 2001 and 2003, at about 18% and 13%, respectively. The highest
consumption
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of food and
vegetables
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was in
men
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and
children
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, at about 27% in 2006 and 13% in 2007.
Following
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this
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, the figure experienced a sudden plunge over the period. In comparison, both
men
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and
children
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consume under twice as much food as
women
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. The number of
women
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eating
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fruit
fruits
and
vegetables
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has been on the rise since 2001, and the figure is expected to reach 35% in 2006.
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, it is predicted that
consumption
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will decline by around 30% in 2008.
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