The diagram below shows information about student attedance in various schools

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student

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attendance in four

diference

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different

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school

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from the year

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2001 to 2007.

generaly

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Generally

speaking, the

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's

present

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slightly

increase

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during the period and

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dominated by Seven Oaks's

pupil

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. in detail, the

pupil

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pupils

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of Royal Latin consistently went up from the beginning until the end of the period,

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Didcot Secondary, Seven Oaks and Page Hill's

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student

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students

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show a fluctuating movement in attendance.

following

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this

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, Seven Oaks

reach

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it's

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its

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peak in

student

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presence in 2004, in the meantime Didcot Secondary and Page Hill in 2004. it's clear that all school's presence

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a

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upward but not in a

sigficant

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significant

number.