The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.

The chart and graph give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. Write a report for a university lectuer describing the information shown below.
The pie chart and graph illustrated the
percent
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per cent
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of sales and share amount for Coca-Cola, respectively, in 2000 and the years between 1996 and 2001. In the pie chart, describe the proportion of Coca-Cola sales in 2000.
The north
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North
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Ameris
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America
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is the highest of trading with
the
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a
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percetages
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percentage
percentages
of 30.4%,
while
africa
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Africa
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and
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the middle
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middle east
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Middle East
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was
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were
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lower
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lowest
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used
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using
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only 7%. The second largest is Latin America, accounting for a quarter. Afterwards, Europe and Asia were the minimum, at about 20.5% and 16.4%, respectively.
Overall
, the total
of
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apply
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volume at around 17
lbn
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lbs
lb
. The graph demonstrated a fluctuation trend in share price during a period of five years. There was
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a siginificant
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siginificant
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significant
rise in 1996.
Then
, the figure dipped sharply in 1998. The peak of
share
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the share
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price
approximately
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80%. It is predicted that the figure will decline and reach 48% in 2000. After
decresing
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decreasing
steady
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steadily
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in 2000, the rate of
Coca-cola
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Coca-Cola
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sales
grow
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grew
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in the following year.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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  • fluctuations
  • correlation
  • trends
  • overview
  • analysis
  • interpretation
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