The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table represents
last
year's Linking Words
time
spent by the UK's unemployed people.
Use synonyms
Overall
, women spent most of the Linking Words
time
on housework either in the morning or Use synonyms
afternoon
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
men
spent most of the morning Use synonyms
time
on job hunting, Use synonyms
while
in the Linking Words
afternoon
, spent ,mostly on watching TV or gardening.
Looking at the data of the Use synonyms
last
year, Linking Words
men
consumed almost 22% of their Use synonyms
time
in the morning and 12% in the Use synonyms
afternoon
for job hunting. They Use synonyms
also
spent 19% of their Linking Words
time
contributing to the housework Use synonyms
Linking Words
while
20% of the Correct word choice
and
time
doing shopping. There are other categories too but the least Use synonyms
time
Use synonyms
men
spent on drinking, Use synonyms
that is
%5 of the total, and above that 8% each on physical activities and staying in bed.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, women spent almost 70% of the total Linking Words
time
doing housework, Use synonyms
that is
49% in the morning and 21% in the Linking Words
afternoon
. Apart from that, they spent 43% of the total Use synonyms
for
shopping and 27% Change preposition
on
for
visiting friends or relatives. They did not Change preposition
on
spent
any Change the verb form
spend
time
Use synonyms
to stay
in bed in the Change the verb form
staying
afternoon
compared to Use synonyms
men
. The Use synonyms
least
Correct your spelling
last
time
they spent drinking is a total of 2%.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, on the other hand, that is, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, afternoon, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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