The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table represents
last
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year's
time
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spent by the UK's unemployed people.
Overall
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, women spent most of the
time
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on housework either in the morning or
afternoon
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.
On the other hand
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,
men
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spent most of the morning
time
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on job hunting,
while
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in the
afternoon
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, spent ,mostly on watching TV or gardening. Looking at the data of the
last
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year,
men
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consumed almost 22% of their
time
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in the morning and 12% in the
afternoon
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for job hunting. They
also
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spent 19% of their
time
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contributing to the housework
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while
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and
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20% of the
time
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doing shopping. There are other categories too but the least
time
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men
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spent on drinking,
that is
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%5 of the total, and above that 8% each on physical activities and staying in bed.
On the other hand
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, women spent almost 70% of the total
time
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doing housework,
that is
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49% in the morning and 21% in the
afternoon
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. Apart from that, they spent 43% of the total
for
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on
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shopping and 27%
for
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on
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visiting friends or relatives. They did not
spent
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spend
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any
time
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to stay
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staying
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in bed in the
afternoon
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compared to
men
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. The
least
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last
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time
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they spent drinking is a total of 2%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, on the other hand, that is, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, afternoon, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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