The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table represents
last
year's time
spent by the UK's unemployed people.
Overall
, women spent most of the time
on housework either in the morning or afternoon
. On the other hand
, men
spent most of the morning time
on job hunting, while
in the afternoon
, spent ,mostly on watching TV or gardening.
Looking at the data of the last
year, men
consumed almost 22% of their time
in the morning and 12% in the afternoon
for job hunting. They also
spent 19% of their time
contributing to the housework while
20% of the Correct word choice
and
time
doing shopping. There are other categories too but the least time
men
spent on drinking, that is
%5 of the total, and above that 8% each on physical activities and staying in bed.
On the other hand
, women spent almost 70% of the total time
doing housework, that is
49% in the morning and 21% in the afternoon
. Apart from that, they spent 43% of the total for
shopping and 27% Change preposition
on
for
visiting friends or relatives. They did not Change preposition
on
spent
any Change the verb form
spend
time
to stay
in bed in the Change the verb form
staying
afternoon
compared to men
. The least
Correct your spelling
last
time
they spent drinking is a total of 2%.Submitted by umark5353 on
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