The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates information about the reasons
of
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for
land
destruction worldwide, whereas
the table demonstrates the causes by regions
, within a scope of a decade during Fix the agreement mistake
region
1990s
.
The changes have been Change the article
the 1990s
measared
by Correct your spelling
measured
persentages
.
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percentages
Deforestation
causes 30% of land
degradation, however
it is not as high as the Add a comma
however,
land
used for over- grazing
which is 35%, and not as low as the areas that are being over-cultivated by people with 28%.Another 7% is destroyed by over means.
Moving onto the information displayed by the information causes in, certain regions Correct your spelling
over-grazing
such
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Including
Australia and New Fix capitalization
including
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).Correct your spelling
Zealand
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, in North America total land
damage was 5% with over-grazing being 1.5% over
cultivation over twice as much Change preposition
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with
3% and Change preposition
at
deforestation
with
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Europe degraded 23% with 9.8% from Replace the word
continent
deforestation
, 7,7% from over-cultivation and the least over effected by over-grazing with 5,5% .The
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In the
last
region Oceania, over -cultivation
did not cause any harm, Correct your spelling
over-cultivation
whereas
deforestation
caused 1.7% and over-grazing 1.3%,leading to a total of 1390.
Overall
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amount of Correct word choice
a large
land
with over-grazing being the leading factor worldwide.Submitted by hrushik2006 on
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