Many things that use to be done in the home by hand are now being done by the machines. Does this development bring more advantage or disadvantage.

Nowadays, many tasks were done by hand before,

instead

, people are currently using electrical gadgets for the job to be finished.Personally, I believe that machines can simplify our lives,

however

, appliances are more expensive to use. First of all, one major advantage to consider is the simplification of house chores.Humans are now using washing machines to wash their clothes, washer is much easier when washing,

moreover

, less labour is

aquired

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required

acquired

.

For instance

, people can do double activities, cooking delicious meals

while

the washing machine running.

Furthermore

, sweeping is

also

another work

which was

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used to be done by hand, but recently, families are using hoovers to clean their apartments

due to

their fastness and simply of work.

For example

, using a broom to sweep the house

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and

it

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takes about 20-30 minutes, but if a person uses a vacuum cleaner, it will be less than that.

Therefore

,

it is clear that

apparatuses can change our way of living and

saves

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us time.

On the other hand

, some

of

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the

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devices need electricity to function,

as a result

of

this

, electrical machines are not economical as compared to human beings using their hands and it is only energy required.Moreso, heavy instruments

such

as

dish washer

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dishwashers

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can demand more power

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during the period of drying and the bills will

also

increase, sometimes these tools bring a lot of diseases

such

as laziness which

lead

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to diabetic illness.

Hence

, using electrical apparatus to serve other jobs in life is costly.

To conclude

, I believe that

this

development brings better lives and

easierness

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easiness

eagerness

to some handworks, whilst,

it's

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also

needs money to pay

the

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source of power.