some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Language
is the most powerful human invention of all
times
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, which enables us to understand each other easily.
While
some advocate
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learning
foreign
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language
for the sake of mere
traveling
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or working overseas, others suggest there are more reasons to learn. In
this
essay, I will share the underlying reasons
of
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learning
new
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language
which
are
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not limited to career and
traveling
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. It is understandable that working and performing domestic travel
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not require us to be multilanguage
speaker
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speakers
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,
hence
the ability to speak in multiple
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is necessary for overseas business. Negotiating with a seller in a market,
for example
, will not run smoothly if we are using
foreign
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language
.
However
, focusing on these two goals is too narrow of an approach and
preventing
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us
to gain
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broader knowledge. On the one side, having superior linguistic ability
such
as fluently
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in
other
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another language
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language
will attract more
tourist
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even when we just stay in our country, which leads to higher per capita income. Take Bali
for instance
, even sellers in the market can speak limited English on top of their mother tongue
language
(Bahasa),
this
practice emphasizes the attractiveness of Bali in the eyes of international
nation
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. On top of that, beyond the business sector,
leaning
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learning
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foreign
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language
enables us to acquire broader knowledge. Most
paper
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published
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internationally, outside of Indonesia, which means In order to understand the content of information and to later apply it, learning English as a second
language
is recommended. In conclusion,
while
leaning
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multiple languages will benefit
for
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travelling especially for leisure or for work, the essence of learning
new
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language
is beyond that, including
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broadening
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one’s knowledge to
supporting
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local and regional income.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
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