some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both views and give your own opinion
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times
, which enables us to understand each other easily. Fix the agreement mistake
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some advocate Linking Words
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learning Change preposition
apply
foreign
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a foreign
language
for the sake of mere Use synonyms
traveling
or working overseas, others suggest there are more reasons to learn. In Change the spelling
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this
essay, I will share the underlying reasons Linking Words
of
learning Change preposition
for
new
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a new
language
which Use synonyms
are
not limited to career and Change the verb form
is
traveling
.
It is understandable that working and performing domestic travel Change the spelling
travelling
do
not require us to be multilanguage Change the verb form
does
speaker
, Fix the agreement mistake
speakers
hence
the ability to speak in multiple Linking Words
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language
is necessary for overseas business. Negotiating with a seller in a market, Change to a plural noun
languages
for example
, will not run smoothly if we are using Linking Words
foreign
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a foreign
language
. Use synonyms
However
, focusing on these two goals is too narrow of an approach and Linking Words
preventing
us Wrong verb form
prevents
to gain
broader knowledge.
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from gaining
such
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other
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another language
other languages
language
will attract more Use synonyms
tourist
even when we just stay in our country, which leads to higher per capita income. Take Bali Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
for instance
, even sellers in the market can speak limited English on top of their mother tongue Linking Words
language
(Bahasa), Use synonyms
this
practice emphasizes the attractiveness of Bali in the eyes of international Linking Words
nation
. On top of that, beyond the business sector, Fix the agreement mistake
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learning
foreign
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a foreign
language
enables us to acquire broader knowledge. Most Use synonyms
paper
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papers
published
internationally, outside of Indonesia, which means In order to understand the content of information and to later apply it, learning English as a second Add a missing verb
are published
language
is recommended.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
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leaning
multiple languages will benefit Correct your spelling
learning
for
travelling especially for leisure or for work, the essence of learning Change preposition
apply
new
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a new
language
is beyond that, including Use synonyms
broaden
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broadening
supporting
local and regional income.Wrong verb form
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