the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
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generate electricity from Rephrase
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a
geothermal energy in a power plant. Remove the article
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Overall
, there are five steps to produce electricity from an energy of geothermal.
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Initially
, stored cold Linking Words
water
is Use synonyms
being
pumped down to the injection well, Unnecessary verb
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traveling
a distance of 4.5km below the surface. Cold Change the spelling
travelling
water
received in the injection well will be passed through the geothermal zone, which Use synonyms
possess
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high temperature
rocks. Add a hyphen
high-temperature
This
process will transform the previously cold Linking Words
water
into hot Use synonyms
water
. Use synonyms
Then
it will be distributed to the production well which later will be pumped up back to the surface to be processed by a condenser.
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water
obtained in the condenser will be modified into the gas form, called Use synonyms
steam
. The Use synonyms
steam
is Use synonyms
then
utilized to power the turbine, with the process involving the circular motion of Linking Words
steam
inside the turbine. Use synonyms
Finally
, the turbine, powered by Linking Words
steam
, generates electricity through a generator, which is Use synonyms
then
loaded into the energy tower.Linking Words
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