THE FOREST AND THE NEED TO PRESERVE IT. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THAT?
A plethora of
Deforestation
has been increasing day by day due to
the rapid increase of buildings. In the cities cutting plants pollution is being arisen. However
, the effects of plant cutting are being suffered by humans. Many problems are generated by Deforestation
and human is also
taking part in this
situation. This
essay will elaborate further
in the following paragraphs
In the contemporary world
, advanced buildings are made by organisations to enhance their work so they cut down plants in the towns. Because of heavy machines they produce carbon dioxide and pollute the climate. A multi-national companies are produced
Wrong verb form
company produces
such
gases which a human cannot breathe well. To illustrate this
, in my city air quality index has crossed 350 due to
smog in the winter seasons and the local government is coping to minimise this
index. However
, different viruses are affecting people's health conditions like eye infections and soar throats etc. The government should ban such
companies that pollute the environment.
In addition
, human activity and other factors result in deforestation
. To clear the natural landscapes to make room for farmers and pastures, to harvest timber, and to build roads and houses.Tropical forests of all varieties, in particular
, are disappearing rapidly by human activity. Consequently
, this
change threatens a human's life. The administration may control human practices to reduce the deterioration of the world
.
In a nutshell, cutting forests is being raised by the community because of their activities and producing hazardous effects in the world
. In my opinion, Deforestation
should not be allowed in the forest because it has to be reserved for people to see the beauty of the world
.Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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task response
Ensure that the essay addresses the prompt directly, including both causes and effects of deforestation, as well as potential solutions. Include a clear thesis statement and develop each main point with supporting details.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the essay with clear topic sentences for each paragraph. Use transitional words and phrases to connect ideas and create a more cohesive flow of information.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and vary sentence structures to convey ideas more precisely and effectively. Use specific and accurate terminology related to deforestation and environmental issues.
grammatical range
Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure. Review the use of articles, prepositions, and word forms for accuracy and clarity.
Your opinion
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