The chart below shows the oercentage of household in owned and rented in accommodation in Englan and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The bar chart portrays the proportion of families who have their own house and choose to rent accommodation in two countries (England and Wales) from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage
of renting a property steadily risen
in the first period, but the trend continued to decrease until 2011.Meanwhile, having a house as an owner was in reverse during the period.
Looking into details, the graph shows the figure of families who had leased accommodation in two cities amounted to almost 80% in 1918. The rate witnessed a decrease, dropping to under 70% in 1939 and 1953. Wrong verb form
rose
Moreover
, the percentage
experienced a fall until 2001 at around 30% and the rate rose again in a small proportion yet reached 40%.
On the other hand
, there were just over 20% accounted for families deciding to buy property in the first period. In the following years, the percentage
gradually increased from 1939 and peaked in 2001 at nearly 70%. However
, ten years later, the proportion in this
type had reduced at a minute rate yet the percentage
was still higher than other groups.Submitted by musa.nuwa on
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