The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The bar graph illustrates the number of households' owners and
renters
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renters'
renter's
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accommodation
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accommodations
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
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, it can be seen that these two categories experienced an opposite trend. The number of accommodation holders developed dramatically,
while
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the other option decreased.
To begin
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with, the number of people who own accommodation started at more than 20%
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, individuals who rent began at almost 80%. There was a slight fall in the second category to below 70%, in 1939 and it remained steady until 1953. Afterwards, it
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increased
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gradually by approximately 30%, from roughly 60% to 30%.
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, it rose and reached merely 40%.
On the other hand
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, the trend of buying
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increased moderately by 10% to around 30 per cent and it was unchanged until 1953. Over the
last
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50 years, it has significantly soared until it peaked at just under 70% in 2001.
Therefore
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, it declined by only 5%
at the end
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of the period.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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