Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that an increasing number of individuals with health problems are opting

alternative

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treatments

instead

of going to hospitals. In my opinion,

this

is a completely negative development because alternative

medicines

are not able to completely cure a disease and safety is not guaranteed. Using alternative remedies to cure people’s health problems, are not successful.

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is

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because

some

medicines

can reduce symptoms, but they can't make them disappear.

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causes a big problem

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if individuals notice that they are still sick, and they decide to go to the hospital. The doctor will tell them to do a body examination, but after taking

medicines

,

this

can lead to errors when analyzing, since the treatment that they had followed could

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omission or short-term disappearance of some indicators in the analysis.

For example

, 30 minutes after taking ibuprofen, the feeling of pain will directly disappear for some hours, but

then

it will start again, so for some diseases,

this

is not the best solution. The use of medicine

that is

not indicated by doctors, effectiveness and safety are not guaranteed.

This

is because people do not know what problem they have. So they will search on the internet for the disease and the solution, but the answers that they may

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on the websites can be false

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since some illnesses have the same symptoms.

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, people won’t treat their problems as important, risking their health and well-being. Recent research concluded that around 85% of people do not give importance to the diseases they have because they think the problem they have is not dangerous. In conclusion, taking

medicines

without

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permission, will not heal the illness completely and it can cause

missunderstanding

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misunderstanding

while

taking analysis,

therefore

, I believe,

this

is a completely negative development.