what is homelessness? what are the reasons for the homeless people

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The term 'homeless' refers to the
people
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who lost loss their homes, whatever the reason was. Most
people
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become homeless
due to
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the bad gathering of friends. Some lost their homes because of
lost
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their job or
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the lost
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lost
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of everything in
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whether their home, assets
and
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or
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even wife as well . Homeless
people
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's lifestyles vary
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country
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to
country
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. In poor countries
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they do rigorous struggle to get food as compared to rich countries . I've seen many homeless
people
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who depend on
government
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shelters
also
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they
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start begging to
fulfill
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their will of drugs. Developed countries provide them food for
entire
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month
along with
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some cash on
monthly
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a monthly
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basis in order to control robbery and unemployment.
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, homeless
people
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directly impact on
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's
economy
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.
As they
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do not work for their livelihood and
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do not contribute
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the
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's
economy
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even
they
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though they
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live in
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country
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the country
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but not
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in the
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's official counting
ofthe
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of the
population. That's how they
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also
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free from paying taxes.
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Government
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The government
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make plans,
according to
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registered data, but plans get disturbed
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these types of
people
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.
Apart from
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this
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, robberies
also
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increasealso
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increase also
increases
increaseing
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increasing
because if they yearn for drugs they do illicit acts. On the whole ,
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government
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the government
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should prepare a proper plan for homeless
people
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and emphasis them to do some kind of work to afford their selves. That's how
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country's
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a country's
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economy
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can rise and unemployment
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lessens. If
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government
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the government
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doesn't do the same,
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will be harmful
for
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economy
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the economy
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and the peace of the
country
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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