Governments should spend money on rail/ways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I believe the good developing countries can see from the infrastructures, the statement says the

government

needs spare

money

for

railways

rather than

roads

. I fully not really agree with

this

statement because the

government

also

needs to spend

money

on other subjects

such

as

roads

not only on

railways

. In my opinion, two aspects are the most important for the

transportation

sector because it can be helpful to make people quickly arrive at their purpose.

Firstly

, in

this

essay, I will explain when the

government

only focused on

railways

. We know that

railways

are good public

transport

because the train is very quick rather

than

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other public

transport

.

For example

, when the

railways

are limited, In my mind, it can be the same with other public

transport

.

Moreover

, when some people need to

quick

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arrive at the office or school because the railway station is crowded it can be a trap for some people.

Secondly

, In my

argue

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about the statement, I prefer to develop other

transportation

ways.

In addition

, In my countries have

much

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roads

in bad condition.

Furthermore

, when the

government

also

gives to spend

money

for

roads

also

can be

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helps for alternative public

transport

such

as buses.

For example

, when the

government

have a good distribution for

spend

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money

, I guess the bus can be another choice for way public

transport

because some student

use

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the bus for

transport

to

going

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to school. In

cases

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some cases

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, some students can be late when the

roads

in

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bad condition because damaged

roads

will

be have

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any

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accidents.

To conclude

, developing countries can be checked based on infrastructure.

Government

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can be spending

money

for

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infrastructures

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infrastructure

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, especially

in

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railways

or

roads

.

Furthermore

, when the

government

only

focused

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in

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one way it can

be

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trap

transportation

.

Moreover

,

government

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should

be

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spend

money

to plan

others

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other

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public

transportation

to provide public

transportation

.