You recently ate at a local restaurant with your family and want to write to the local newspaper to tell them About the restaurant What you ate Why you would / would not recommend this restaurant
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter about the restaurant which is located near my house.I would be happy if you would publish about this
eating place
in your newspaper.
To start with,last
week,I wanted to spend time with my family and I went to a restaurant which is located 10 minutes away from my home and the name of the place
is Ustaad which is very famous nowadays in my city.The atmosphere is
very good and Wrong verb form
was
firstly
,I ordered the snacks and drinks that one was
very delicious Correct subject-verb agreement
were
and
after that, we ordered shahi paneer and garlic naan and the taste was Correct word choice
apply
very
excellent.
Rephrase
apply
Furthermore
,I think that everyone should visit this
place
.Because the price is very reasonable and the environment is awesome as well as
the quality of the food is superior.They have many dining spaces. So you have not wait for a long time.This
restaurant give
discount on many dishes.Change the verb form
gives
Along with
this
,the buffet system is also
good for families.The service is unbelievable and free car parking is also
available at this
place
and I highly recommend it to all people,they should eat at this
eating place
.Because customers can save money and enjoy yummy food here.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Thank you
Yours Faithfully,
Gagandeep KaurSubmitted by sidhuranjeet518 on
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task response
Ensure that your letter has a clear purpose and that all paragraphs contribute directly to the main aim of the communication. Add more specifics when you describe experiences to better engage the reader.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by using a wider range of cohesive devices to better relate your ideas to one another. Try to start with an introduction, develop ideas in separate paragraphs and end with a conclusion.
lexical resource
Enhance your lexical resource by incorporating a variety of vocabulary. Avoid repetition of words and phrases. Use synonyms and less common expressions to demonstrate a broader language range.
grammatical range
To improve your grammatical range, use complex grammatical structures like conditionals, passive voices, and varying sentence types. Check for agreement between subject and verb and correct tense usage.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite