The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs of the plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the structure of the Southwest
airport
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Airport
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in recent times and the development next year.
Overall
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, the plan of the airport will be larger than at present and will have more facilities, including shops, atm, sky train, bag drop and car hire. At present, there is an entrance and exit
of
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for
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departures and
arrivals
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at the front. Coming from a departure entrance, the passengers will see a check-in counter and café, after that people need to pass through passport control and security.
Next,
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there is a concourse which includes a walkway. From
arrivals
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, people need to go to passport control and customs and exit and the
arrivals
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door. In the next year, the plan will expand the concourse and a walkway will be replaced by a sky train.
In addition
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, additional café, atm and car hire will be added to the
arrivals
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site. In terms of the departure site, there is a new bag drop zone which
near
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is near
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a café and shops before a concourse.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words arrivals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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