The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates some information regarding the
quantity
of people coming to Change the quantifier
number
Caribbean
Correct article usage
the Caribbean
Island
for holidays from 2010 to 2017.
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Islands
Overall
, the total number
of tourists visiting the place rose significantly and visitors staying on cruise ships were
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apply
also
rise
from the middle of the period. Wrong verb form
rose
Whereas
, tourists staying on Island
experienced a fluctuation trend.
In detail, the sum of people coming to the Correct article usage
the Island
island
was 1 million
in 2010. Then
it was increasing
steadily until 2015 approximately 2.8 Wrong verb form
increased
million
. After 2016 it rapidly went up and reached 3.5 million
in 2017. Visitors staying on cruise ship
was about .3 Fix the agreement mistake
ships
million
in the year
2010. In 2011 the people coming was nearly multiplied and in the next year
it went down to nearly .3 Add a comma
year,
million
. After 2012 the tourist number
showed an upward trend until 2017 about 2million
.
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2 million
In contrast
, visitors staying in
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on
Island
had a fluctuating trend Correct article usage
the Island
though out
the 8 years. In 2101 it was .7 Correct your spelling
throughout
million
and there was
not any changes in the Change the verb form
were
number
in the following year
. However
, later from the graph it apparent
that slowly going up to 1.5 Add a missing verb
is apparent
million
in 2015. From there the amount of individuals coming to see the place has reduced. But in the final year
the Add a comma
year,
number
was again increased.Submitted by rinuthomasmathew07 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, million, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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