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Some people think that modern tecchnology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #tecchnology
People
's attitudes toward recent technology have been a debatable matter among
people
. Some of them believe that
this
 new approach has helped members of
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society to be more sociable. Others,
however
, find that modern technology has a negative effect of driving
people
 to be introverted.
Thus
,
this
 essay will discuss both views
,
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 and
then
 I will state my personal opinion regarding
this
 matter.  On the one hand, a group of
people
 believe in the positivity of
technonlogy
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technology
 in developing one's
communications
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 ability.
In other words
, several individuals struggle with shyness and difficulties in delivering their thoughts.
Accordingly
, through texting and other forms of technological communication, many
people
benifited
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benefit
 from the boundaries set by
such
this
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types of social connection and
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 more comfortable
to share
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 their ideas and thoughts.
For example
, researchers have
comfirmed
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confirmed
 that shy and
introvert
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people
 tend to prefer communicating through their social platforms
instead
 of direct contact.
This
 evidently proves that developed forms of technology contribute positively to
people
's social interactions.
On the other hand
, some would argue that new technologies have the opposite effect which
rather
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discourage
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 individuals
to interact
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 effectively. Their view describes how distance contact can form a barrier that prevents the speaker
to deliver
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from delivering
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 his/her thoughts and
feeling
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 properly to the addressee.
As a result
, a negative attitude towards
this
 kind of interaction can evolve affecting future conversations negatively.
For instance
, a significant
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 of
ealders
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elders
readers
 have expressed their distress about using recent methods of
contacts
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 finding
hard
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 to use them and
feel
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 socially excluded since many
people
 now use them In my point of view, I find that both views are valid, yet I am in
favor
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for
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 the latter. Despite how great the means of interaction
have
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 become, it surely is not liked by everyone. I
peronally
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personally
 think that direct contact with
people
 is more easier compared to texting and other online communications.
To conclude
, public opinions towards modern technologies are controversial between those who think they are socially advantageous and those who find it the opposite. In spite of the fact that there are
multipe
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multiple
 positive outcomes, I believe that their cons outweigh their pros.
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