The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they on holiday in 2010
The given bar chart illustrates four types of accommodation preferred by British
people
for their vacation during 2010.
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people
from England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland preferred hotels most, Use synonyms
while
caravan and camping were the least preferred places to stay. Even though a significant number of individuals from each country choose self-catering as their accommodation.
The highest number of tourists from each place wished to stay at hotels Linking Words
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among other regions England recorded as the top at around 55%. Linking Words
However
, North Ireland travellers chose hotels roughly 45% of which was lower than other Linking Words
people
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In contrast
, the caravan was liked by them at 30% which is higher comparatively. Linking Words
Further
move on the second highest choice was self-catering which dominated in three countries at around 30% except Northern Irelan which recorded nearly 15%.
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On the other hand
, in almost every mentioned state traveller the least preferred facility was camping. Because in Scotland less than 10% of Linking Words
people
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other states visitors chose about 10 to 15%.Linking Words
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