The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration provided displays the

process

of making

sugar

from

sugar

canes

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cane

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.

Overall

, is a 7-step and linear

process

,

is

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mainly

man-made

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a man-made

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process

,

although

some machines are used in the

process

, the

process

begins with growing

sugar

canes

and ends with the production of

sugar

.

To begin

,

sugar

canes

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cane

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are

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is

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planted, which

it

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takes between 12 and 18 months to grow,

after

this

period of time,

then

is time for harvesting. There are two ways of carrying out

this

activity, it can be done by using cutting tools where human labour is needed or by specialized machines which

collects

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collect

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and store

sugar

canes

.

The next step is

to crush the

sugar

canes

, converting them into juice, using

with

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apply

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a specific machine.

Following

this

, the juice will be purified in a limestone filter, so rests that are not needed are thrown away. Once all juice is purified, it is evaporated to get syrup, afterwards, the syrup

pass

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through the centrifuge, so

sugar

crystals are separated from the syrup.

Finally

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the

sugar

crystals are stored in a big metal can, for drying and cooling.