Today, many people do not know their neighburs in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowadays, many people
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live
nearly
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together but they
don
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do
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not know
anythings
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anything
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about
anybod
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anything
in large cities. As a reason, it
cause
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causes
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a lot of negative
things
.
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The amount
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of
things
is
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communication
,
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and relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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. Many times, they do not have the idea together and have many
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elements
.
Besides
, everyone should do something to have a good
relationship
with their neighbours. The
problem
that everyone
have
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but they do not know
that
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what
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they are doing cause a lot of
problem
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problems
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. It
is mean
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means
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that many
reltionship
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relationship
relationships
break
ot
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out
because they do not care,
attend
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or attend
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very much. Many
house
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houses
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which can beside or opposite but they do not know tht how many people, what their
name
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names
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, when
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are, when
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can
you
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apply
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hang out with
me
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them
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, and many
things
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other things
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.
however
,
i
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think it is a normal thing in the
relationship
. Because they are insensitive to
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those around
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around
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around them
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, they need to do for
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their lifestyle
to become more creative and perfect
more
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apply
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.
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But
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they are
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forgotten
to care
to
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for
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neighbours. I think that the simple solution
that
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which
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is
the
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communication, perfectly tackles the
problem
.
Although
it is simple, it is very important. They can say bid when they go out or
comeback
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come back
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their
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to their
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home, sometimes give small gifts after you have
an
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happy occasion,
hang
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and hang
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out together. It is very
simpe
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simple
but it is simplified but it is various to do
many
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much
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communication to become comfortable. Or
many
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any
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time
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times
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, they can help together when having
a
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apply
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difficult
about
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apply
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living
condition
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conditions
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as
no
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not
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have money,
take
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to take
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care of their child. Many
things
is
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are
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opportunity
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an opportunity
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for a good
relationship
when you know the
way
to improve it. We have many
way
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ways
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to solve a
problem
. And it is the most
importion
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important
how to have a
reasionable
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reasonable
way
for
this
problem
. In there, the neighbours
is
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are
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very
popularity
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popular
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with everyone. And the
way
is
many
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much
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communication to improve
relationship
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the relationship
a relationship
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.
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