The graph below shos the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparizons where relevant.
The line chart compares the number of
stores
that shut down and new entry stores
in the market in a specific nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the number of stores
that decided to close their business accounted for more than the total of business that just entered the market over the period, except in the first year.
Turning first the total of stores
opening in 2018, stood at around 8,500 then
fall
dramatically to just under 4,000 in 2012 but rebounded by roughly 50% in 2014. Until the Wrong verb form
fell
last
recorded year, 2018, the total of opening stores
had decreased gradually to 3,000, which was the lowest point in the trend.
On the other hand
, stood at around 6,500, The total of stores
that shut down had fluctuated before fall
significantly to just under 1,000 in 2015, Wrong verb form
falling
then
rebounded dramatically to roughly 5,000 until the end of the following year.Submitted by diyolory on
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