The map shows the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps
depicts
the developments which took place in the town of Stokeford between 1980 and 2010.
Change the verb form
depict
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely rural to a mainly urban area.
In the year 1930, the town was Linking Words
much
greener residential area with a large number of farmland and gardens, but during the next 80 years, the town saw Add an article
a much
a significant changes
. The most noticeable is that all of Correct the article-noun agreement
significant changes
a significant change
Correct article usage
the firmland
firmland
of the west Correct your spelling
farmland
firm land
being
demolished to make houses. Add a missing verb
is being
In addition
, many gardens were chopped down.
Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
post
office, bridge, river stoke and primary school remained. The shops were cleared and converted into houses. Correct article usage
the post
Moreover
, the gardens Linking Words
also
turn into a retirement home.Linking Words
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