The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year.
The two pie charts provide information about the
overall
global energy
utilization and energy
production in the previous year.
Overall
, the majority of consumed energy
last
year came from oil
. Among the seven source categories, the coal industry provided the largest electrical power supply worldwide.
It is noticeable that more than a quarter of power
used worldwide was produced by crude Add an article
the power
oil
at 34%. While
coal and gas accounted for almost identical figures of 25.1% and 20.9% respectively, combustible renewables and waste were just 10.6% of the total consumed energy
.
Looking closely at the figures for electricity
generation, clearly, coal accounted for the highest proportion of generated electricity
at 39.8%. This
is followed by natural gas which created 19.6% of total world electricity
produced. The percentage of power supply generation using oil
was not proportional to its consumption, as few as 6.7% was generated using oil
reserves. Water and nuclear sources were also
considerably greater in terms of generation compared to consumption 16.1% and 15.7%. Furthermore
, there are other resources for both supply and use but it was just a marginal figure. Finally
, there was no electricity
that was produced last
year using renewable combustions and wastes.Submitted by sheenasedeno on
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