The map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The map illustrates the roadway to reach a
city
hospital in 2007 compared to 2010.
Overall
, the railway differs in additional areas added near the
city
hospital in 2010 from 2007. As seen from the map, the
city
hospital in 2007 had fewer transportation-accessible areas nearby as opposed to the
city
hospital in 2010. In 2007, a small space for parking was located next to the hospital
road
however
in 2010, a public parking lot for cars was located to the East of the
city
hospital
while
the initial space was used as a staff's transportation parking lot only.
Moreover
, a bus station was established and located to the west of the hospital
road
, connecting to the two roundabouts on both ends of the pathway.
On the other hand
, there are several similarities that are kept the same throughout a period of 3 years from 2007 to 2010. The
city
hospital stays at the same location, the ring
road
still covers the outside area of the hospital.
Furthermore
, the pathway to the hospital remains the same by crossing the main railway to the hospital
road
.
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