The map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The map below shows the road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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The map illustrates the roadway to reach a
city
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hospital in 2007 compared to 2010.
Overall
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, the railway differs in additional areas added near the
city
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hospital in 2010 from 2007. As seen from the map, the
city
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hospital in 2007 had fewer transportation-accessible areas nearby as opposed to the
city
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hospital in 2010. In 2007, a small space for parking was located next to the hospital
road
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however
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in 2010, a public parking lot for cars was located to the East of the
city
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hospital
while
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the initial space was used as a staff's transportation parking lot only.
Moreover
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, a bus station was established and located to the west of the hospital
road
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, connecting to the two roundabouts on both ends of the pathway.
On the other hand
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, there are several similarities that are kept the same throughout a period of 3 years from 2007 to 2010. The
city
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hospital stays at the same location, the ring
road
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still covers the outside area of the hospital.
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, the pathway to the hospital remains the same by crossing the main railway to the hospital
road
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.
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