The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030
The chart below illustrates the proportion of elderly citizens in
Canada
, Germany
and the UK
in 1980, 2000 and 2030.
Overall
, there are differences between these three countries over the years.
According from
the bar chart, the percentage of elderly in Change preposition
to
Germany
has the highest proportion and will increase by 5 per cent
between 2000 and 2030. Whereas
, the percentage of elderly in Canada
in 1980 was the lowest at 10 per cent
and the UK
was almost as high as Germany
. In 2000, both Canada
and the UK
had the same proportion of old citizens and less than Germany
by 5 per cent
. In 2030, the percentage of elderly in Canada
will surpass the UK
by a little more than 20 per cent
and the UK
will almost reach 20 per cent
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