The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030

The bar chart shows the percentage of elderly citizens in three countries in 1980, 2000, and 2030
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The chart below illustrates the proportion of elderly citizens in
Canada
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,
Germany
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and the
UK
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in 1980, 2000 and 2030.
Overall
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, there are differences between these three countries over the years. According
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the bar chart, the percentage of elderly in
Germany
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has the highest proportion and will increase by 5 per
cent
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between 2000 and 2030.
Whereas
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, the percentage of elderly in
Canada
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in 1980 was the lowest at 10 per
cent
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and the
UK
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was almost as high as
Germany
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. In 2000, both
Canada
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and the
UK
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had the same proportion of old citizens and less than
Germany
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by 5 per
cent
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. In 2030, the percentage of elderly in
Canada
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will surpass the
UK
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by a little more than 20 per
cent
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and the
UK
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will almost reach 20 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, germany, uk, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic trends
  • elderly population
  • percentage
  • growth rate
  • projections
  • factors influencing
  • implications
  • comparative analysis
  • social services
  • economy
  • population aging
  • elderly care
  • statistical data
  • historical trends
  • future trends
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