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The pie charts illustrate how many degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The pie charts illustrate how many degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the 1990, 2000, and 2010.
#degrees #fields #university
The pie illustrates about percentages of the different
course
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courses
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 in several years at the National University. The
data
 shows four
major
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majors
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such
 as
computer
science
,
medicine
,
business
, and
law
. The
data
 gives information in third years different by 1990, 2000, and 2010 In general,the highest
data
 almost was
computer
science
 every year.
On the other hand
, the lowest
data
also
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 almost
law
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 course. Regarding
from
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types of
the
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data
 applied major at the National University in
third
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the third
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 year, we can
seen
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 the highest
enthusiasted
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enthusiasts
enthusiast
 in
computer
science
 by 2010, where the value of
major
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the major
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 granted was 45%.
Moreover
, In 1990 and in 2000 had a
many
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interested
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 in
computer
science
course
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courses
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; are 30% and 40%, respectively.
Moreover
,
business
 and
medicine
also
 got more
interested
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 for some
student
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students
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, where the apply in major
business
 and
medicine
are
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30% and 25% by 1990, respectively.
Furthermore
, In
the
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2000, the percentages
20
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were 20
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% and 30% for
business
 and
medicine
, respectively.
Moreover
, the
business
 and
medicine
 courses are
got
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granted 15% and 25%, respectively. In
term
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terms
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 of the lowest percentages in degrees granted is
law
. Following the
data
,
In
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 1990 to 2000 was
increased
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 started from 15% to 10%.
Nevertheless
, the
interested
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interest
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of
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in
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law
 degrees was decreased
in
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from
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 2000 to 2010, where
the
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they
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 granted from 15% back again to 10% granted.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words data, computer, science, medicine, business, law with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • degree
  • field of study
  • granted
  • National University
  • decade
  • trend
  • popularity
  • dominant
  • least popular
  • analysis
  • technological advances
  • economic changes
  • gender distribution
  • correlation
  • job market
  • prediction
  • future trends
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