Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.

It is certain that every

individuals

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need

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needs

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to attend

university

, but it is now

debating

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that the number of men and women students in the

university

should be equal. In my perspective, people are more aware of gender equality, but the acceptance for studying in

the

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apply

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universities should depend on the youngsters themselves. There are reasons to support the claims.

To begin

with, the trend of feminism has become more popular and widespread in the past few years;

however

,

this

should be involved in education. It is because

the

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acceptance for joining universities needs to be acquired from young people’s individual skills

not

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their gender.

In addition

,

this

might limit the opportunity of the students to join the

university

, and those young individuals might have

a

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potential to attend the courses they desire.

This

probably forces these students to apply for a job immediately

instead

of

further

education in the

university

which makes them have less chance to be prosperous. In summary,

this

policy is unacceptable as gender should not be a matter of applying

university

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, but the acceptance should come from their individual intelligence and skills. By doing

this

, we will be able to produce potential people to inherit and run the country

instead

of the elders in the future.