The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

The charts below shows the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.
The pie charts compare the proportion of
water
comsumption
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consumption
for three
difference
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purpose
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purposes
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in North
America
, South
America
,
Europe
, Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
.
Overall
, the amount of
water
is
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used for
agricultural
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the agricultural
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sector
make
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up the largest proportion in South
America
, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
.
By contrast
, in North
America
and
Europe
, the vast
of
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majority of
water
is used for
industrial
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the industrial
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sector
. In South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
,
water
usage for agriculture
take
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up 71%, 84%, 88% and 81% respectively. The amount of
water
use
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for
this
sector
in North
America
and
Europe
is only 39% and 32%. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at
water
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the water
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comsumption
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consumption
industrial
sector
.
This
sector
comsumes
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around 48% and 53%
water
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of water
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use in North
America
and
Europe
,
whereas
the figures for
remaining
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the remaining
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areas are significantly lower, at only
from
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5% to 12%. Turning to the household, we can see that the percentage of
water
used for
this
sector
in all zones is
slighly
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slightly
small. It just
vary
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from 7% to 19%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, europe, asia, sector with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • predominant
  • variance
  • agricultural irrigation
  • residential consumption
  • industrial processes
  • environmental impact
  • economic factors
  • cultural practices
  • government policies
  • sustainability
  • conservation
  • trend analysis
  • resource management
  • efficiency
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