The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph illustrates a summary of visitors to 6 types of art museum
centers
in 2011. Change the spelling
centres
Overall
, minimum
of 3 million sightseers Add an article
a minimum
has
visited the art galleries.
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
To begin
with, in 2011 Louvre art gallery in France had the highest number of guests (8.5 million) with comparison from other
6 exhibition Correct article usage
the other
museams
; Correct your spelling
museums
whereas
Russia had the lowest number of visitors (3 million).Submitted by shazraibrahimphotography2 on
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