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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts present a comparison among three countries -
Korea
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,
Sweden
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 and the United Kingdom, in terms of their methods for disposing of dangerous
waste
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.
According to
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 the diagrams, the largest share of hazardous
waste
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 - 69% - comes from recycling,
while
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 in
Sweden
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 the figure shows 25%. In the UK,
this
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 method is not used. They are more focused on burying them underground, which has shown with numbers, 82%,
while
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 in
Sweden
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 and
Korea
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, it accounts for 55% and 22% respectively. Incineration is used more in
Sweden
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, where 20% of harmful
waste
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 is burned,
while
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 9% in
Korea
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 and 2% of
waste
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 is destroyed by fire. Methods like dumping at sea and chemical treatment are used only in the UK and account for 8%
both
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of both
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 of them.
To sum up
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, in European countries most used method of burying hazardous
waste
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underground
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is underground
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,
while
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 in
Korea
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 people
more
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are more
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 focused on recycling
them
Correct pronoun usage
it
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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