The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts present a comparison among three countries -
Korea
, Sweden
and the United Kingdom, in terms of their methods for disposing of dangerous waste
.
According to
the diagrams, the largest share of hazardous waste
- 69% - comes from recycling, while
in Sweden
the figure shows 25%. In the UK, this
method is not used. They are more focused on burying them underground, which has shown with numbers, 82%, while
in Sweden
and Korea
, it accounts for 55% and 22% respectively. Incineration is used more in Sweden
, where 20% of harmful waste
is burned, while
9% in Korea
and 2% of waste
in UK
is destroyed by fire. Methods like dumping at sea and chemical treatment are used only in the UK and account for 8% Correct article usage
the UK
both
of them.
Change preposition
of both
To sum up
, in European countries most used method of burying hazardous waste
underground
, Add a missing verb
is underground
while
in Korea
people more
focused on recycling Add a missing verb
are more
them
.Correct pronoun usage
it
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words korea, sweden, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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