The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
These
graph shows the value and sources of Change the determiner
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fish
imported to the US in 1988, 1992 and 2000. It is clear from the graph that the value of import
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imported
fish
was
increased over the Verb problem
has
years
. Also
, Canada
has
one of the Verb problem
is
source
of Change to a plural noun
sources
fish
imported to the US and it was
decreased through the Verb problem
has
years
.
According to
what is shown, In 1988, the total value import
cost Change preposition
of import
about
6.57 billion dollars. Add a missing verb
was about
Then
, the cost was improved considerably between 1992 and 2000 by 8.52 billion and 10.72 billion dollars.
Moreover
, the US have many sources to import fish
. In 1988 Canada
has
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had
major
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a major
percentge
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percentage
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of aroun
aroun
60%. After that, it Correct your spelling
around
was
dropped dramatically to 34% in 1992, and after 8 Unnecessary verb
apply
years
Canada
fell by 28 per cent. However
, Chaina
has lee percentage in 1988 Correct your spelling
China
about
13% but after 4 Change preposition
of about
years
it was
increased slightly around 20% and in 2000 the Unnecessary verb
apply
propration
rose by 10% more. Correct your spelling
proportion
While
,
the other Remove the comma
apply
soucres
have wave change during 1988 and 2000.
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sources
To sum up
, we could say that the
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apply
Canada
increased gradually during the years
but China has revers
.Correct your spelling
reversed
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