The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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data about the

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of people visiting art galleries in France,

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, Korea, Spain, and Russia in 2011.

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measured in

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, The Louvre (France) became the most visited by

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on the other hand

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, the National

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of Korea, The Museo del Prado and The State Hermitage (Russia) became less popular explorer by tourists than the

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art galleries in 2011. The Louvre in France is one of the most popular museums visited by tourists almost 9 million people, Followed by The Metropolitan

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visitors

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and The British

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in 2011.

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, In 2011, The art gallery explored by over 3

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of Korea.

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, The Museo del Prado in Spain and The State Hermitage in Russia got fewer

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

visitor numbers
fluctuations
peak season
off-peak season
trend
visitor demographics
attendance
special exhibition
promotional campaign
footfall
gallery capacity
cultural attraction
art enthusiasts
exhibit
statistical comparison
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