The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar illustrates information about the
summarize
of Replace the word
summary
spend
money for planning the countries in 5 companies Change the verb form
spending
by
between Change preposition
apply
period
2008 to 2011. The values of bar charts in Correct article usage
the period
billion
dollars
.
In general, the statistical data had more fluctuating data year
by year
. Furthermmore
, the highest growth Correct your spelling
Furthermore
organisation
was team 2. However
, following from the historal
pattern we can Correct your spelling
historical
historic
se
the Correct your spelling
see
use
decrease
amount year
by year
in organisation
5.
Regarding of
the fluctuating pattern, we can see value Change preposition
apply
had
more than 1 Verb problem
was
billion
dollar
every Change to a plural noun
dollars
year
such
Correct quantifier usage
apply
as
Change preposition
apply
organisation
2 had a started
point the approximately 1.25 Replace the word
start
billion
dollars
by 2008. Moreover
, followed by organisation
3 of the total Capitalize word
Organisation
spend
money for developing nations was 1.5 Replace the word
spending
billion
dollars
in2008
. Correct your spelling
in 2008
Besides
that, the
Correct article usage
apply
organitation
2 always Correct your spelling
organisation
organization
increase
since 2008, Wrong verb form
increased
where
the Correct word choice
when
values
Fix the agreement mistake
value
had
Verb problem
was
the
approximately 1.25 Correct article usage
apply
billion
and growth 1.50
Change preposition
of 1.50
billion
dollars
to 2011. In contrast
, the
Correct article usage
apply
organisation
3 had more fluctuative
than other Correct your spelling
fluctuation
organisation
based on the sum of money given for Fix the agreement mistake
organisations
develop
nations were 1.5, 1.75, 1.25, and 1.5 Wrong verb form
developed
billion
dollars
from 2008 to 2011.
In terms of the decrease
values
Add a comma
values,
year
by year
was organisation
5, where the numbers of total amount had a start value from 1.25 to decrease
the
approximately 50 per cent every Correct article usage
apply
year
until 2011. On the other hand
, the
Correct article usage
apply
organisation
4 also
almost decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
year
by year
. Meanwhile, the
Correct article usage
apply
organisation
4 could growth
in 2010, where from 2009 had Replace the word
grow
value
Correct article usage
a value
0.3
to 0.5 by 2010.Change preposition
of 0.3
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, dollars, year, organisation, decrease with synonyms.
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